Re: Releases Notes 2.0 - Translations and comments

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Hi,

Release notes looks great. Some minor suggestions:

1) In "Supported Hardware " section last line about power management on laptops....
   You may like to add "thermal" is built into kernal and (I think "fan" module was also recently included in the kernel config)

2) In "Linux Kernel" section, 2nd para about network cards and modules: I think there is a typo  about oci1394: shouldn't it be ohci1394 ?

3) I know prominent features in Slitaz 2.0 will be mentioned on the front slitaz page. But probably "Release notes" should also include  these.  For example, "Overview" section can have a "prominent features in this release" subsection or bullet points such as:
   a) Better hardware support (support for wifi, windows drivers and low memory (through flavors)),
  b) Customize and roll your own distribution (or flavor)
  c) Web Boot support
  d) Openbox replaces jwm as window manager,
  e) More tiny graphic utilities for administration, setting preferences and keeping your system upgraded


Thanks

Rohit
 

2009/3/30 Pierre ROMILLON <pierre.romillon@xxxxxxxxxx>
Bonjour à toutes et à tous,
Hi all,

Quelques erreurs de typo. dans 'relnotes.fr.html',
Some typo. errors in 'relnotes.fr.html'

Cordialement,

Pierre

Post-scriptum : sous Ubuntu actuellement, je ne sais pas me servir de 'Gedit' désolé pas de DIFF file
actually under Ubuntu I don't know how to use 'Gedit', sorry no DIFF file



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