Re: [SliTaz] Proofread: 5.0 RC-1 announce

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How about the following content?
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The Slitaz team is pleased to announce the availability of the SliTaz GNU/Linux 5.0 Release Candidate 1 (RC-1)! It's quite mature, but still requires intensive testing before we can release a fully stable version.

SliTaz 5.0 RC-1 includes many small bug fixes like improved dialogs for the slitaz-config utility that gives new users the ability to easily setup their systems from a graphical or text interface, Tazpanel now has a new look and feel and the distribution has better language support than ever before. We've also fixed the issues with old ATA hard drives to keep up with our tradition of being able to run on ancient systems.

The desktop is powered by the PCmanFM file manager on LXDE as before, but with the addition of the trash can and gvfs/udisks support. The packages database has received over 200 package updates and we've added about 50 new packages to the repository. In preparation for the upcoming stable release, we've revamped the main website with a brand new theme that is cool as well as simpler to navigate.

Download <a>SliTaz RC-1</a> here.
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I have taken much care that there are no grammatical mistakes and it is catchier.
Can you also mention the kernel version in RC1?



Regards,

Arun

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On Thu, May 1, 2014 at 11:01 PM, Brenton Edgar Scott <trixarian@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
The Slitaz team is pleased to announce the availability of the SliTaz
GNU/Linux 5.0 Release Candidate 1 (RC-1)! It's very mature, but still
requires intensive testing before we'll be able to release a fully
stable version.

SliTaz 5.0 RC-1 includes many small bug fixes like the improved dialogs
for the slitaz-config utility that gives new users the ability easily
setup their systems from a graphical or text interface, Tazpanel boasts
a look and feel and distribution now has better language support than
ever before. We've even fixed support for old ATA hard drives to keep
with our tradition of being able to run even on ancient systems.

The desktop is again powered by PCmanFM, but with the addition of
the trash can and gvfs/udisks support. The packages database has
received over 200 package updates and we've added about 50 new
packages to the repository. In preparation for the upcoming stable
release, we've updated the main website with a new style while making
the interface much easier to use.

Download the new <a>SliTaz RC-1</a> here.

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